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:iconcricketwings:
Oh I can tell you've come so far as an artist. This image shows so much progress and growth from you! The shading has gotten so much more refined. The hair is infinitely more realistic. And you happen to have picked my favorite color scheme! Golds and reds are a weakness of mine. ;) You seem to be experimenting with backgrounds too, which is huge! I was so happy to open this image and take a good look at it.

The first thing I noticed about Isluinah is that her tail is just hanging down. With this sort of image, where nearly everything is blurred from motion, I think her tail should be flying with the speed. Also, it looks like the sun is setting from behind, so she should probably be in shadow more.

Her expression really gets me. She seems SO thrilled to be running at high speed, and I love that. Keep up the good work whirl. I know you are capable of wonderful things!
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:iconwhirl-wind:
I really love this critique feature! :hug:
Thank you Cricket <3

I absolutely agree about the tail, I noticed that too, but somehow flying mane and tail aren't exactly my thing and I was so tired of this picture that I just let it be that way.

Ugh yeah shadows, how I wish that I could draw them, I'm not a star with them haha I need art classes.

I'm suprised you like the hair because it's my least favourite thing from the whole picture!

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:iconcricketwings:
Any time! <3 I know how that goes. It's pretty tiresome to go back and change things. I call that artist syndrome XD.

I love the hair! It looks really realistic!

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